雅思小作文开头为了不与题目相似，要怎么改写？ ?
（1）近义词替代。这是最直接最简单的方法，比如题目中出现spending，你替换成相同词性的近义词expenditure
（2）改变词性。可以用同个词根的词，比如题目中出现名词consumption，你可以替换成动词consume，或者再进一步替换成buy／use，具体动词要根据不同语境搭配。
（3）改变句式，比如主被动句的转换。比如题目中说：“British?people?consume?water”,?可以替换成“water?is?consumed”
雅思大作文怎么写
分享一个雅思20年写作名师的大作文框架或者说文章结构 Organization。
1、paragraph 1—introduction
Rephrase question sentence + both sides
——题目改写+正反方观点
• 段落1行文结构：
Nowadays, many people…
At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty…
In this essay, I will review the issue to seek a conclusion that…
（此类套话，要小心使用）
• 注意：改写问题句 (rephrase question sentence), 不应该有单词重复
• 每一篇大作文都建有立场，万一没有可以写：（整个文章的主题句）
In this essay I will review both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
2、paragraph 2—side A 将论点扩展开
• 段落2行文结构：
To begin with, …
Moreover, …
In addition, …
3、paragraph 3—side B 将论点扩展开
• 段落3行文结构：
On the other hand, however, …
Furthermore, …
Consequently, …
扩展论点同paragraph2。
4、paragraph 4—conclusion
both sides + my opinion，论点总结+自己的立场，同时跟其他一样，结论段也是三个句子。
• 段落4行文结构：
To summarize, there is no doubt that…
Meanwhile, …
In the final analysis, therefore, one can conclude that…
• 结尾段必须包括三个部分正方观点小结，反方观点小结，和个人观点，注意个人观点表述必须清晰明了，可以同意一个立场，也可以同意或不同意双方立场，言之有理，顺理成章即可。
雅思大作文的行文结构，只是提供了一个总体框架；雅思写作中，除了搭建框架外，好的词句积累同样非常重要。
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如何花式改写雅思作文，拓展作文内容就这么简单
原创功能没有办法自己申请的雅思改写，需要等腾讯发送开通邀请才可以。只有开通雅思改写了原创功能雅思改写，才能开通打赏功能。
如果想要快点获得原创标签，必须要多发纯原创的文章。这样腾讯就会邀请雅思改写你开通原创功能雅思改写了。
不仅按推送次数，还有文章的质量也是一个考核因素
求大神批改雅思5 test4大作文，谢谢
您好雅思改写，这一篇文章写雅思改写的可以雅思改写，除了一些选词（同义词用的较少）和语法结构的小问题雅思改写，再来就是有几个点重复了几次，有点换汤不换药的感觉。
As far as I concerned,
experiences we may have in our life will have much more influence. The
essay will explain two main point of view and demonstrate two reasons
why I agree that experiences play more important roles in development
and generating the personalities.
改写：As far as I am concerned, experiences we have in our life will have much more impact. This essary will explain two main points of view and demonstrate two reasons why I agree with the belief that experiences play a more important role in the mental development and the forming of personality in a person.
Firstly, people have
little realization about how to be a person with the proper opinions and
ethics. All of the awareness should be built during the process of
communicating with the world. Especially the effects of families are
most significant through the process of growth. The behavior and
education from parents will be remembered and imitated. When people
begin to study in school, more social activities will affect their
personalities on both positive and negative sides and the situation may
continue until their personalities be built completely.
改写：Firstly, people have little or no realization about how one's personality is formed from proper opinions and ethics. Self-awareness should be built upon the process of communicating with the world, espeically the close interactions of family members being the most significant throughout the personal growth process. The behaviour and ways of doing things from parents are usually retained and iminated. When people begin to study in school, social activities will further affect their personalities both affirmatively and negatively, and the situation may continue until their personalities mature completely.
第一句和第二句不是看的很懂，不确定改写是否保留了原意。把原来较为啰嗦词组压缩成了状语。
Secondly, sometimes the
personalities can be changed totally because of an experience in our
life if it is meaningful or terrible. It is undeniable that an
experience can be a turning point for a person, such as an exciting
adventure or a miserable memory. All of these may rebuild the
personalities of people and influence their development in the future.
这里的一些词用了多次，需要改用近义词。
改写：Secondly, personalities can sometimes be changed unconsciously by a purposeful or frightening experience in our life. It is undeniable that a retention of an experience, such as an exciting adventure or a miserable encounter, can be a turning juncture to a person. All of these may alter the personalities of people and bear upon their development in the future.
However, it is undeniable
that the characteristics may also be important, however it can be
restructured by the environment at the most time, and that is the reason
why the education is extremely important.
In conclusion, because of the reasons above, I tend to favor the later view.
这里的 however 在同一句用了两次，转折再转折感觉有点奇怪，undeniable 用了第二次雅思改写；education 第二次用到，第一次是父母亲的 education，但看不到和这个的关联。important 同一个段落用了2次。However 感觉推翻了前面的第一点和第二点，用的不恰当，应该改用让步较好，（尽管……）好过（虽然……）。
改写：Although it is indisputable that the characteristics we are born with may also be important, the environment we are in and the people we grow up with will inevitably have a much more pronounced impression on us, especially during the K12 education period. In conclusion, with the aforementioned reasons, I tend to favour the later view that the experiences we have in our life weighs more on our personality building process.
您的结束段落比较薄弱，没有适当的总结中间的两个段落，然后再重述一遍您开头的观点。再来就是雅思词汇不是很到位，可以算作是雅思词汇的可能就5个。希望这个重写可以帮到您。
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