求雅思作文10篇。200字以内的。THANKS!!!!
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雅思写作7分范文：
International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism in places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism.
People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purposes, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a countrys economy, the more tourists visit a country and spend money there, the better it is for the country; that way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currencys rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education.
Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and causes quite an impact on visited locations, such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics. Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmental friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners.
Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a “win-win” exchange process. The very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Thailand.（雅思7分作文）
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求大神批改雅思 10 test1大作文，谢谢
1.第一句at an early age应后置到句尾，原因是作时间状语比作后置定语更合适。本段最后一句中的behavior应改成manners,请注意manners是可以被teach的，但behavior不行！
2.第二段第一句at early ages of people改成at an early age，紧跟着后半句改成形式主语句it is vital to cultivate…。下一句people要么改成people as adults要么干脆改成adults以便与children相对应，要知道children也属于people范畴。
3.第二段最后一句people与后面的children不对等，而且people应该用所有格形式people's. 建议将possibility of these people…rules in the future will…改成the possibility of disobeying…rules in the future for these children will…；最后的children under well-education要么改成children under good education，要么改成well-educated children.
4.第三段第一句of后面要加一个关键的短语the consequence of；而which引导的限制性定语从句要改成非限制性定语从句，而且句尾的mistakes前要加the。
5. 没看懂第二句的意思，必要时请在“追问追答”里说明。下一句compared to后面有两处要加the：to之后与children之前。
6. Abusing…这一句前半部分由于是状语从句，应该有一个类似as或because的词引导。下一句中children前加the.
7. 下一句sharing后面要加上it；confiscate这个词用得太大而且不当（其意思是to take temporary possession of as a security, by a legal authority！），不如用通俗的take hold of更好。下一句中如果praises是指同一种赞美言辞，使用the same praises会更好。
8. 本段最后一句feelings可以使用更具体一些的self-respect，而influence用consequence也许更好。
9. 最后一段是一句话，故最后一个逗号后要用and、whereas之类的连词连接；最后的awareness of what应说清楚。
雅思10海外版test3的写作
同学，剑桥雅思10Test3写作的条形图无特殊考点，注意对比描写即可 雅思10海外版test3的写作task1写作思路 6.5 1. 结尾段给出总体概述 2. 逻辑清晰，连词使用恰当；但分段不明确 3. 无单词拼写错误，但使用不准确：roughly almost等 4. 句型复杂，个别语法错误，如the graphs presents等
求大神批改雅思10 test3大作文谢谢
您好，个人认为可以做出以下一些调整：
第一段落：Differences between
countries are gradually disappearing because the same products can be
bought anywhere worldwide. Some people consider it affirmatively while
others show negative attitudes. In my opinion, I believe that it is a
positive development.
1）can be bought anywhere worldwide 这里的 worldwide 是副词性（worldwide 也可以作为形容词使用）修饰 bought，而 anywhere 是副词作地点状语，感觉结构上比较奇怪，原文的 in the world 可能更好些 anywhere in the world 中 in the world 是介词短语作地点状语，而 anywhere 起到了强调的作用，要比 anywhere worldwide 更通顺些。
2）consider it affirmatively 中使用了宾补的用法，而宾语补足语是对宾语的补充说明，通常是形容词性的，不是副词性的，所以 consider it affirmative 可能更好，否者 affirmatively 会被看作是修饰谓语动词 consider 但却位于宾语的后面，结构上不对。
3）attitude 作为（态度；看法）是不可数名词。
好的地方：文章用了 more similar，而您用了 difference disappearing，是一个很不同的但很不错的反义表达用法。但需要注意的是 more similar 不同等于 the same，而 difference disappear（消失）等同于 the same，但两种表达方式之间的程度差距是有的，感觉 disappear 改成 diminish（缩小）可以保留一些差距，或是用 becoming marginal（变成微不足道）也可以的。
第二段落：Because of the
development of productivity and transport, the same products can be
produced and delivered in almost every country. People now can own what
they can only buy in other countries in the past which is much more
convenient. The cost and time will be saved because they can just go to
the local supermarket to purchase what they need instead of going
abroad. It can also be an innovative way for people to experience other
countries’ cultures without going there as requirements for traveling
abroad are usually hard to meet.
1）the development in productivity and transport 可能更好些，这里的 productivity 通常翻译为（生产率；生产力），可以考虑改成 manufacturing and transport，因为是（制造业）和（运输业）的发达导致……，而不是（生产力）导致……。
2）... can be produced and delivered to almost every country. 这里用 to。
3）People now can own what they can only buy in othr countries in the past ... 改成 People can now own what they could only buy ....。
4）The cost and time can be saved ... 还可以考虑改成 The costs in time can be saved ...；原文 cost 是（价格），也即是（价格和时间）（可以被）省下，will be saved 用了一般将来时表示将来某个时间可以省，但不是现在，不恰当；The costs in traveling and time can be saved（这里的 costs 指的是成本，也就是旅行和时间成本可以被省下来）。local supermarket 改成 local shops 可能更好，因为 supermarket 通常仅限于购买（生活用品），但比如瑞士表，车子等等是无法在（超市）买得到的。.... requirements for traveling abroad 中的 requirements 通常会被认为是（必须的）也就是比如护照、签证等等的硬性规定；但其他条件比如时间、金钱、身体状况等等无法从 requirements 中体现出来，可以考虑 prerequisites（前提条件，必须预先具备）可能涵盖范围更多些。
第三段落：Not only for customers,
but it is also necessary and positive for companies to sell their
products abroad. Nowadays, the influence of companies usually depends on
the extent of their products cover. Companies only sell to their native
customers are commonly uncompetitive compared to the international
companies whose products cover global areas. In the long-term sight,
companies merely focusing on local buyers may not survive in the future
market because of economic globalization.
1）customers（顾客）改成 consumers（消费者）可能更好些；not only ... but also ... 是关联连词，通常关联的部分是并列结构，可以考虑改成 Not only is it beneficial and positive for consumers to buy foreign goods locally, but for companies to sell their domestic products internationally as well. 用了3个并列结构（1）for consumers vs for companies（2）to buy foreign goods vs. to sell domestic products（3）locally vs. internationally.
2）.... on the extent of their products cover 结构和语义上有问题，可以考虑改成 on the extent of the retail coverage of their products（产品零售覆盖的延伸）
3）Companies only sell to their native customers are commonly uncompetitive compred to the international companies whose products cover global areas. 句子结构和语义上有问题，可以改成 Companies selling only to their local customers are generally uncompetitive compared to companies whose products cover global territories.（主句是 companies are uncompetitive，其余的都是修饰作用）
4）In the long-term sight,
companies merely focusing on local buyers may not survive in the future
market because of economic globalization. 这里的 sight 是多余的而且导致混淆了，merely 的位置是错误的；改成：In the long-term, companies focusing merly on local buyers may not survive well in the future markt due to the inevitable economic globalization.（添加了 well 和 he inevitable）
第四段落：Some opponents will
question that the diversification of different countries will be
negatively affected by the same products sold worldwide. The features of
diverse countries will disappear gradually. However, many companies
will specially produce their products to fit the habits of their foreign
customers. The difference between cultures can be noticed from slightly
different designs aimed at different countries. It can also improve the
images of companies because of their understanding and considering
thoughts.
1）... that the diversification of different countris ... 改成 that the uniqueness of different cultures ...；（不同文化的独一无二性质）要好过（不同国家的多样化）
2）features 译为（特征）时，通常指的是显而易见的外在形状的特征，使用 characteristics 作为（特征）可能比较符合文章的含义。.... will disappear gradually. 改成 ... will disppear eventually。这里 eventually 有种最终寻找不到，只是时间问题，强调的是最终的结果，和 disappear 有强调的含义；gradually 强调的是过程，不是最终的结果，语义比较弱一些。
3）.... will specially produce their products to fit the habits of their foreign customers. 改成 have custom tailored (特制定做) their products to suit the habits of their international customers. 需要把 foreign 改成 international，因为 foreign customers 可以看做是本地的外国顾客，也就是生活在本地的外国人，而 international customers 就基本上是生活在国外的其他外国人。
4）The difference between cultures can be noticed from ..... 这里的 noticed 可以考虑改成 realized 或是 kept 或是 retained（保留）可能更好些。
第五段落：In conclusion, being able
to buy the same products anywhere worldwide is a positive development
due to its influence on both customers and companies.
1）还是 worldwide 的用法，读起来比较不顺。
2）on both the consumers and companies.
您的结尾和文章的要求有点出入：
文章的要求是：Do you think this is a positive or negative development that countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. 也就是文章问的是（国家变得越来越相同是好的还是不好的发展方向。）问的是导致人们可以在全世界任何地方都买到同样产品这个结果的原因，问的是原因是好的还是坏的。
而您的结尾是 ... being able to buy the same products anywhere worldwide is a positive development due to its influence on both customers and companies. （能在全世界任何地方买到同样的产品是一个好的发展，归功于在顾客和公司的影响上。您把结果，也就是可以在全世界任何地方买到通常的产品的这个结果作为文章的发展方向了。）显然和文章的本意是不一样的。也就是您最终证明的结果并不是文章要求您需要证明的，有答非所问，会被认为是离题的，也就是您把原因和结果反过来了。
撇开离题这个方面，文章本身的结构是不错的，达到了雅思一定的要求。尽管一些句子还可以再简化，也就是从句有点多了，可以适当的把从句改成短语，文章的逻辑思维和铺垫层次是不错的。选词方面还可以再加强些，也就是有更好的词汇可以表达更清晰的语义。
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